Sofia and the Invisible man (by Johnny – 2nd grade – Part 1)

There once was a little girl named Sofia. She was a very adventurous girl.

One day she went in the woods, then she saw a house. So she went inside to investigate the house. But then she heard some footsteps so she hid under the cupboard. It was the invisible man and he was about to go into the forest to chop down trees.

Once he was outside the forest Sofia decided to investigate the whole house. When she went to the living room she saw many precious things like a collection of rubies. But there wasn’t a sign of danger in that abandoned house so she continued to investigate.

When she was about to go to the kitchen she heard a very strange noise from the living room. It was the invisible man, he wanted to check if anyone was there. He went to the to the living see and he saw his collection of rubies spoilt. And now he was sure someone had been in his house. But he stopped finding because he wanted to finish his project in the forest.

When Sofia knew that the invisible man had gone outside she again continued to investigate, so she went into the kitchen. Now Sofia was feeling hungry so she decided to look in the fridge, and she saw some delicious foods. And the first thing that she wanted to eat is some pancakes. After eating she hid just to make sure if the invisible man wanted to come in again.

After a while Sofia didn’t hear any footsteps she just continued. But then the invisible man went in so Sofia now had to find a place to hide but it was too late, so the invisible man caught Sofia, and put her tied in his bedroom. Now Sofia was in the invisible man’s house so she needed water, food, and many more things. So one day one when the invisible man went in his room with a scissor, Sofia dragged it from him and freed herself. The invisible man was furious after that so he chased her in the forest.

Meanwhile, her mum and dad where worried because Sofia had been the forest for a long time so they decided to call the police to find her. So when the cops arrived they saw the house that Sofia went in, so they went in. But they saw nothing accept a shadow behind them so they turned around to see the stranger, but they saw nothing. The invisible man knew it was a chance to drug the cops, but he only drugged one cop because when he drugged one cop the other cops ran away.

About now the leader of all cops found something strange from the stranger that was he was invisible so the cops took their guns and shot at the shadow. But the invisible man noticed that the cops where about to shoot their guns so he ran and disappeared in the woods. So the cops chose to explore the house. Meanwhile Sofia was running in the woods. And Sofia said to herself that she needed to go home. So that’s what she did.

First, Sofia came back to the abandoned house because she knew the cops had come, because her mum and dad might worry so they could call the cops. And when she was at the door of the house she saw police cars, so that meant the polices couldn’t be far, so she got in the house and started to search all the house. And she finally fined the police. And the police offcers told the beginning to the end of the journey in the invisible man’s house. And Sofia was amazed with this case, so she invited the cops to the invisible man’s house 8:pm in the morning to go to the invisible man’s house. And the next day at 8:pm, Sofia met the cops at the same time.

The cops and Sofia explored the house together. And inside the house, it was spooky and horrible because there was all sorts of body traps or prison traps. So the next day the polices invited the number one detective in the whole town. And when the detective went to the abandoned house with the cops and Sofia he heard mouses squeaking, frog’s ribbiting and wolves howling at the sky even though it was not night yet, even if it was night time, it wouldn’t be a full moon. But they didn’t have much time so they went in the house. Then the detective started to look for some clues.

Suddenly, he saw a very beautiful picture of this house. And that meant this house was a very good house at once, but then someone maybe had abandoned it. So this was a very good clue for the detective. And the detective had even more ideas.

(to be continued…)

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